** Section 12.1.2.1. Would it be more precise to say:
OLD
The degree of protection afforded to this key material can vary by
device, based upon considerations as to a cost/benefit evaluation of
the intended function of the device.
NEW
The degree of protection afforded to this key material can vary by the intended
function of the device and the specific practices of the device manufacturer or integrator.
** Section 12.1.2.1. Would it be more precise to say:
OLD The degree of protection afforded to this key material can vary by device, based upon considerations as to a cost/benefit evaluation of the intended function of the device.
NEW The degree of protection afforded to this key material can vary by the intended function of the device and the specific practices of the device manufacturer or integrator.