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Minor grammar #420

Closed steven-bellock closed 2 years ago

steven-bellock commented 2 years ago

The Relying Party role is assigned to entities that uses Attestation Results by applying its own appraisal policy to make application-specific decisions, such as authorization decisions.

should be

The Relying Party role is assigned to entities that use Attestation Results by applying their own appraisal policies to make application-specific decisions, such as authorization decisions.

or

The Relying Party role is assigned to an entity that uses Attestation Results by applying its own appraisal policy to make application-specific decisions, such as authorization decisions.

nedmsmith commented 2 years ago

I'm in favor of the second option: The Relying Party role is assigned to an entity that uses Attestation Results by applying its own appraisal policy to make application-specific decisions, such as authorization decisions.

henkbirkholz commented 2 years ago

I am okay with second option.