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Documentation of initial IETF Supply Chain Integrity Transparency and Trust (SCITT) WG Charter
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some more refactoring #3

Closed henkbirkholz closed 2 years ago

henkbirkholz commented 2 years ago

and a few more typos

henkbirkholz commented 2 years ago

Two major observations:

  1. to most IETF'lers the "registry" in "Transparency Registry" will probably read counter-intuitive (violation of POLA). As I also do not know a better word, we probably have to introduce our use of "registry" a little bit better instead, I think
  2. The first occurrence of "The WG will develop standards" needs a little bit more flesh to the bones, I think. Right now, this could mean a lot of things, such as protocols, or trust relationships, or security flows.
OR13 commented 2 years ago

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