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Intdir review comment: device user in complete sentence #242

Closed mingpeiwk closed 1 year ago

mingpeiwk commented 2 years ago

Bob Halley commented:

The definition of "Device User" has this sentence fragment: "Relates to Device Owner and Device Administrator." I don't think noting the relation is needed given the definitions are right next to each other and you'll have gotten a sense about the device user already, but if it is going to be noted, it would be better to do it with a complete sentence.