line 97 "full resolver" -> "full/recursive resolver" (since "recursive resolver" is used line 111) line 98 grammar fix -> added "respectively" at the end of the sentence. line 162 expanded "Dot DoH DoQ" in the terminology line 520 removed "(e.g. 1.1.1.1)" as that's a specific live service, and also not guaranteed to always host a DNS resolver. RFC7322 #3.3 does not provide guidance on example IP addresses - only example domain names...but instead of replacing 1.1.1.1 with one of the IPv4 addresses reserved for documentation (RFC5737) I'd just remove the example.
line 97 "full resolver" -> "full/recursive resolver" (since "recursive resolver" is used line 111) line 98 grammar fix -> added "respectively" at the end of the sentence. line 162 expanded "Dot DoH DoQ" in the terminology line 520 removed "(e.g. 1.1.1.1)" as that's a specific live service, and also not guaranteed to always host a DNS resolver. RFC7322 #3.3 does not provide guidance on example IP addresses - only example domain names...but instead of replacing 1.1.1.1 with one of the IPv4 addresses reserved for documentation (RFC5737) I'd just remove the example.