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Establishing Local DNS Authority in Split-Horizon Environments
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Section 10/VPN Tunnel (Comment John Scudder) #65

Closed boucadair closed 5 months ago

boucadair commented 5 months ago

Section 10 begins in medias res

Section 10 begins, "When the VPN tunnel is IPsec". This creates whiplash for the reader. What VPN tunnel? Were we talking about VPN tunnels? I even searched back in the document to make sure, and nope, this is the only place the string "VPN" occurs. I assume you mean something like, "when the client is using a VPN tunnel, and the tunnel is IPsec". Please, update the section so you don't start in the middle.

boucadair commented 5 months ago

see #68