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Editorial comments of Computing-aware forwarding definition #52

Closed muzixing closed 10 months ago

muzixing commented 11 months ago

Computing-aware forwarding (or steeting, computing): A forwarding (or steeting, computing) scheme which takes as input a set of metrics that reflect the capabilities and state of computing resources.

The syntax seems incorrect or hard to be understood. hope to make it clear for readers.

muzixing commented 11 months ago

A forwarding (or steering, computing) scheme which takes a set of metrics that reflect the capabilities and state of computing resources as input.

is it ok?

boucadair commented 11 months ago

Not sure how the proposed NEW is better that the OLD

muzixing commented 11 months ago

'takes as input a set of metrics that' seems too complicated in syntax, but put 'as input' in the end can help readers to know, the metrics is treated as input. At least to me, it is better.