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Robert Wilton: Nit #46

Closed ShuaiZhao closed 1 year ago

ShuaiZhao commented 2 years ago

Rob: This is somewhat outside my area, and this is a minor comment, but I have to confess that I found it slightly harder to read, I think because it is fairly acronym heavy, and I wonder whether expanding out some of the less frequently used acronyms may end up making the document slightly more readable and approachable.

boucadair commented 2 years ago

Made some few changes but all acronyms seem to be adequately expanded. See https://github.com/ietf-wg-drip/draft-ietf-drip-arch/commit/c2ad8eb9809915edcc3ae345d11097619c09f953