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Section 6 Rework #30

Closed kc2rxo closed 7 months ago

kc2rxo commented 1 year ago

From the opsdir review:

I struggle with the descriptions in section 6.1

6.1. Serial Number

There are four ways a Serial Number is supported (by DRIP):

  1. As itself as a clear-text string with additional information

  2. As itself as a clear-text string mapped to a DET "post" generation by the manufacturer (for use in authentication) and additional information

  3. As itself as a clear-text string mapped to a DET "post" generation by the user (for use in authentication) and additional information

  4. As an encoding of an HI and associated DET by the manufacturer (for use in authentication) with additional information

these could be both tightened up and be more clear if written as something like the following track backing and forth between the explanitory notes or the cases should end up being 4 sub headings e.g. 6.1.1 2/3/4 and not simply a list.

The proposed example has been removed here for conciseness.

kc2rxo commented 1 year ago

This has been reworked extensively with the main changes coming from -10 which is posted on the datatracker.

kc2rxo commented 9 months ago

Please refer to #39 for Serial Numbers and proposed plans forward.