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Closed sdatspun2 closed 1 month ago

sdatspun2 commented 2 months ago

On Fri, Aug 23, 2024 at 5:35 PM Roy T. Fielding wrote:

On Aug 23, 2024, at 5:00 PM, Mark Nottingham wrote:

Hi David,

The registration template in the draft doesn't contain the fields required by RFC8288 - it needs to be updated.

I guess Mark means that the link relation in 6.2 is using the header field template instead of the link relation template in RFC8288 (same information, different template fields).

The header field definition in 6.1 seems to be okay.

I encourage the authors to make RFC8594 (Sunset) a normative reference, since a normative requirement is placed upon its usage in combination with Deprecation. In effect, this spec updates 8594 and that should be noted in the document metadata.

....Roy

On Fri, Aug 23, 2024 at 11:26 PM Julian Reschke wrote: On 24.08.2024 08:21, Mark Nottingham wrote:

If it's using Structured Fields, it shouldn't be using ABNF.

It currently says in https://www.ietf.org/archive/id/draft-ietf-httpapi-deprecation-header-05.html#name-syntax:

The Deprecation response header field describes the deprecation of the resource identified with the response it occurred within (see Section 6.4.2 of [HTTP]). It conveys the deprecation date, which may be in the future (the resource context will be deprecated at that date) or in the past (the resource context has been deprecated at that date). Deprecation is an Item Structured Header [RFC8941]. Refer to Section 3.3.7 of [STRUCTURED-FIELDS] for ABNF of sf-date:

So what would need to be removed is the mention of "ABNF".

Best regards, Julian

On 24 Aug 2024, at 9:23 AM, David Dong via RT [drafts-expert-review-comment@iana.org](mailto:drafts-expert-review-comment@iana.org) wrote:

Dear Mark Nottingham, Roy Fielding (cc: httpapi WG),

As the designated experts for the Hypertext Transfer Protocol (HTTP) Field Name Registry registry, can you review the proposed registration in draft-ietf-httpapi-deprecation-header-05 for us? Please see

https://datatracker.ietf.org/doc/draft-ietf-httpapi-deprecation-header/

The due date is September 6th.

If this is OK, when the IESG approves the document for publication, we'll make the registration at:

https://www.iana.org/assignments/http-fields/

Unless you ask us to wait for the other reviewer, we’ll act on the first response we receive.

With thanks,

David Dong IANA Services Sr. Specialist

@mnot @reschke @royfielding

sdatspun2 commented 2 months ago

draft 06 published

sdatspun2 commented 1 month ago

Re: [IANA #1372825] expert review for draft-ietf-httpapi-deprecation-header (http-fields) On Wed, Sep 4, 2024 at 4:12 PM Mark Nottingham wrote: Hello,

The template needs to have a 'Structured Field' field with a value of 'Item'.

Also, there are no 'Change Controller', 'Author', or 'Protocol' fields in the registry.

Cheers,

sdatspun2 commented 1 month ago

[httpapi] Re: [IANA #1372826] expert review for draft-ietf-httpapi-deprecation-header (link-relations)

On Wed, Sep 4, 2024 at 4:13 PM Mark Nottingham wrote: Hello,

The description now reads:

Description: Identifies deprecation related documentation for the context that is primarily intended for human consumption.

This is confusingly worded; I'd suggest something like:

Description: Refers to a resource that is documentation (intended for human consumption) about the deprecation of the link's context

Also, there is no 'author' field in the registry; that should be removed.

Cheers,

sdatspun2 commented 1 month ago

On Wed, Sep 4, 2024 at 10:23 PM Mark Nottingham wrote: Looks good, thanks!

On 5 Sep 2024, at 10:55 AM, Sanjay Dalal [sanjay.dalal@cal.berkeley.edu](mailto:sanjay.dalal@cal.berkeley.edu) wrote:

Thanks Mark.

Please chekc https://github.com/ietf-wg-httpapi/deprecation-header/blob/main/draft-ietf-httpapi-deprecation-header.md. Once you are ok, I will publish a new draft.