Closed suehares closed 5 months ago
A suggestion for text change for paragraph 6 in section 1 that starts "The mechanisms defined"
Old text/E.g. MPLS Traffic Engineering (TE) or Segment Routing (SR)/
New text/For clarity, only some examples of tunneling capability are given within this document.
For example, MPLS Traffic Engineering (TE) examples are described in this text. Other tunneling
technologies have been described in detail in other documents and overview has been included
in the text. For example, the details for Segment Routing (SRv6) are provided in [BGP-CT-SRv6],
and an overview of that document is provided in section 7.13. /
Jie's comment on the same point
Jie: The brownfield and greenfield description depends on the time and the technology used in the network first, thus may not be accurate in all cases. Suggest to remove brownfield and greenfield here.
clarified text:
"The mechanisms defined in this document allow different tunneling technologies to become Transport Class aware. These can be applied homogeneously to intra-domain tunneling technologies used in brownfield networks as well as greenfield networks. For clarity, only some tunneling technologies are detailed in this document. For example, MPLS Traffic Engineering (TE) examples are described. Other tunneling technologies have been described in detail in other documents and only an overview has been included in this document. For example, the details for Segment Routing (SRv6) are provided in [BGP-CT-SRv6], and an overview is provided in Section 7.13."
Comment from Keyur Patel's review
1) Section 1.