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4 months ago Introduction, paragraph 11
Current text:/ In this case, it is possible to send the policy to each headend over a BGP session to that headend, without requiring any further propagation of the policy/
new text:/ In this case, it is possible to send the policy to each headend over a BGP session to the BGP Peer associated with that headend, without requiring any further propagation of the policy/
Introduction, paragraph #10
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Current:/ Typically, a controller defines the set of policies and advertises them to policy headend routers (typically ingress routers). These policy advertisements use the BGP extensions defined in this document. The policy advertisement is, in most but not all cases, tailored for a specific policy headend; such an advertisement may be sent on a BGP session to that headend and not propagated any further./
New text: Current:/ Typically, an SR controller defines the set of policies and advertises them to policy headend routers (typically ingress routers). These policy advertisements use the BGP extensions defined in this document. The policy advertisement is, in most but not all cases, tailored for a specific policy headend associated with a BGP Peer. Such a policy advertisement may be sent on a BGP session to the associated BGP Peer and not propagated any further./