ietf-wg-ppm / draft-ietf-ppm-dap

This document describes the Distributed Aggregation Protocol (DAP) being developed by the PPM working group at IETF.
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Pass of abstract, intro, and references #615

Closed cjpatton closed 1 month ago

cjpatton commented 1 month ago

Make the terminology in the intro more consistent with the rest of the document, e.g., say "measurement" instead of "input".

For the references (cf. https://github.com/cfrg/draft-irtf-cfrg-vdaf/pull/508):

Tidy up the presentation language section: