ilyarozonoyer
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6 years ago I have made the changes that you indicated and I uploaded the updated presentation here: https://github.com/ilyarozonoyer/Biodiversity-Capstone
Is there also going to be a certificate for completing the course?
Thank you! Ilya
On Tue, Jul 31, 2018 at 7:55 AM, Abhisek Sen notifications@github.com wrote:
Great work! I probably won’t have much to say here because you pretty much nailed it all the way through.
I could not see your python work since you completed the project in codecademy environment. However, all the numbers I can find in the presentation looks solid. So great work.
Presentation: I think presentation needs more work. The content makes sense because I know the details of the project. However, if you show this to your friend who does not know anything about biodiversity, it will be very confusing for him/her to understand.
A good presentation skill is hard to achieve. I would divide a presentation into sections like an introduction, data exploration, results, and conclusion. In the introduction, you write an overall view of your project. Then your second slide becomes the data exploration section. Your graphs look excellent but I would not put them at the end of the slides without any title. Data exploration section would be a nice fit where you can embed those plots. While taking about chisquare and results, I would first explain the goal you are trying to achieve. Finally, a conclusion slide is a must. Some readers just read the conclusion slide without going into the details of the presentation.
In every slide, there should be a title and a body. The title should be a bigger font than the body. Best is to pick a color theme available from the presentation.
Good work overall with room for improvement.
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Great work! I probably won’t have much to say here because you pretty much nailed it all the way through.
I could not see your python work since you completed the project in codecademy environment. However, all the numbers I can find in the presentation looks solid. So great work.
Presentation: I think presentation needs more work. The content makes sense because I know the details of the project. However, if you show this to your friend who does not know anything about biodiversity, it will be very confusing for him/her to understand.
A good presentation skill is hard to achieve. I would divide a presentation into sections like an introduction, data exploration, results, and conclusion. In the introduction, you write an overall view of your project. Then your second slide becomes the data exploration section. Your graphs look excellent but I would not put them at the end of the slides without any title. Data exploration section would be a nice fit where you can embed those plots. While taking about chisquare and results, I would first explain the goal you are trying to achieve. Finally, a conclusion slide is a must. Some readers just read the conclusion slide without going into the details of the presentation.
In every slide, there should be a title and a body. The title should be a bigger font than the body. Best is to pick a color theme available from the presentation.
Good work overall with room for improvement.