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GliGli based Prophet 600 firmware upgrade
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User Manual Suggested Revisions, Section 3 #174

Closed ceharris closed 1 year ago

ceharris commented 2 years ago

Suggested corrections and revisions for section 3 attached as marked up PDFs.

I noted many places in the text in which "e.g." (exempli gratia) should be replaced with "i.e." (id est) but I probably missed some. It's probably worth doing a global search for "e.g." and replacing it with "i.e." if what follows is intended to clarify or restate, rather than providing an example.

p600fw_User_Manual_beta2022.2-section3.pdf p600fw_User_Manual_beta2022.2-section3-markup.pdf

image-et-son commented 2 years ago

Thanks! I'll correct it (and add it to the donation list, which stood at 25 EUR before your ticket).