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Volcanic ash - text #142

Closed Charlotte-Morgan closed 6 years ago

Charlotte-Morgan commented 6 years ago

We need to review and update text on the volcanic ash landing page and volcanic ash report template to make sure that it clearly describes what the product and service are about and is explicit about any limitations in the use and interpretation of the results.

cc @RikkiWeber , @estukriswati

Charlotte-Morgan commented 6 years ago

@ivanbusthomi Please use the following text strings as notes in the Nearby places table. This text replaces the words "No nearby cities or airports affected"

Use this note if no records returned: "No nearby cities or airports are affected by forecast ash fall on the ground in this report. "

Use this note always : "This report does not include the potential impact of airborne volcanic ash on aviation services. Nearby airports may already be affected or become affected in future by ash fall on the ground or other hazards."

ie when there are no records there will be 2 notes

Charlotte-Morgan commented 6 years ago

@ivanbusthomi Please use the following text to create header tokens for the volcanic ash impact report template

Header text: left side Volcano: , , , Position: , Eruption Column Height (asl): Province: Alert level:

Header text: right side Model duration: Report time: Report expires: <event_date + 1 day>, ,

Charlotte-Morgan commented 6 years ago

@ivanbusthomi in the disclaimer text please replace the words "at the surface" with the words "on the ground" image

Charlotte-Morgan commented 6 years ago

@lucernae - please change the Volcanic Ash landing page text to say this: This page contains near realtime volcanic ash impact assessments generated prior to or during recent volcanic ash eruptions in the Indonesia region. Hazard maps of volcanic ash thickness on the ground are produced by Indonesia’s Geological Agency, Badan Geologi (http://www.bgl.esdm.go.id) and used by the Indonesian National Disaster Management Agency (BNPB) to produce InaSAFE impact assessments (http://www.bnpb.go.id or http://realtime.inasafe.org). InaSAFE Realtime Volcanic Ash assessments estimate the potential impact of volcanic ash on the ground. This information is used by disaster managers to help them understand the potential scale of the volcanic ash impact and to recommend mitigation activities for the most vulnerable communities. This is particularly important in the lead up to an eruption when communities have an opportunity to prepare for a possible hazard event.

Charlotte-Morgan commented 6 years ago

Hi @ivanbusthomi I have updated the about page for volcanic ash. The first paragraph, notes and limitations. Could you please update the Indonesian language page with the new text?

ivanbusthomi commented 6 years ago

@Charlotte-Morgan OK - I will update it today. Sorry for the late response.

Charlotte-Morgan commented 6 years ago

@lucernae to extract text strings used in template to make it easier to update and translate

ivanbusthomi commented 6 years ago

Hi @Charlotte-Morgan , Sorry for the late response, it's been under my to do list for quite a while.

lucernae commented 6 years ago

mas @ivanbusthomi,

https://github.com/inasafe/inasafe-django/blob/develop/django_project/realtime/templates/realtime/ash/index.html#L33

You can browse other files too for respective hazard landing page. For example, flood landing page is in https://github.com/inasafe/inasafe-django/blob/develop/django_project/realtime/templates/realtime/flood/index.html

For these static pages, you have to make a pull request to change the text. Or you can just give me the strings.

Charlotte-Morgan commented 6 years ago

Hi @ivanbusthomi and @lucernae - I am not seeing these changes on the landing page, about page or in the template. These things must be in place before we go live.

@gubuntu

ivanbusthomi commented 6 years ago

@Charlotte-Morgan now that @lucernae (thank you Mas) has implemented some updates in the production site, I can start resume the changes for the text there

ivanbusthomi commented 6 years ago

Hi @Charlotte-Morgan I have updated the about text translation in the staging site to include the changes you've implemented for the English one. I can continue with the production site if you are happy with it.

@lucernae - I made a PR to update the landing page in https://github.com/inasafe/inasafe-django/pull/235 to include suggestion above. Could you please check it?

Charlotte-Morgan commented 6 years ago

hi @ivanbusthomi - thank you for updating the translation. I am not able to check this but if you are happy, then I am happy. Please continue to work on the material for the production site.

Charlotte-Morgan commented 6 years ago

Hi @ivanbusthomi - I've spotted an error in the header info. The report should expire 24 hours (1 day) after the event date and time. This is different to the duration of the wind forecast

cc @RikkiWeber

here is the original request from 1 December @ivanbusthomi Please use the following text to create header tokens for the volcanic ash impact report template

Header text: left side Volcano: , , , Position: , Eruption Column Height (asl): Province: Alert level:

Header text: right side Model duration: Report time: Report expires: <event_date + 1 day>, ,

Charlotte-Morgan commented 6 years ago

@gubuntu - when the final change is made to correct the error in the header - we are happy that all the text requested has been included: landing page, template and about pages.

@RikkiWeber has reviewed and is happy with the content

Charlotte-Morgan commented 6 years ago

I think we can close this