Very nice paper. You're one of the only students to collect your own data for the project, great implementation of digital survey skills. Some comments as I read the paper:
I recommend you go to the academic writing program or the English Language Institute to get support with your grammar and spelling. The project is well-developed, but the paper contains numerous spelling and grammatical errors. They provide free one-on-one consultations plus courses and workshops on academic writing
You run your own survey with human subjects, so you need to get IRB approval if you plan to use this data outside of a course project (if you want to write an MA thesis with this data, you need IRB approval). Did you get this? If so, what is the application number and contact info for the UChicago IRB?
Why run a second regression model with just the statistically significant variables? Use theory to guide your modeling strategy, otherwise you risk engaging in false discovery
Uses basic OLS for analysis, but overall a sound research design
Very nice paper. You're one of the only students to collect your own data for the project, great implementation of digital survey skills. Some comments as I read the paper: