People will only give your page about a 3 second or less view before deciding to stay or clicking off to someplace else. So you have to decide what you most want people to see in those 3 seconds. Right now, Inder's version has the viewer focused on the "tag line”--- “Talk to someone who cares” ... That is what grabs the viewer’s eye. But it is equally sized with the quote underneath it (actually the quote is a bit larger) and this causes the very important tag line to compete with the quote. My recommendation would be to **make the tag line larger and make the quote smaller** so they do not compete. "Talk to someone who cares" is the most important message on the page in terms of helping women heal. A phone call gives us an opportutnity to connect with them, and let them learn we really do get it; we care, and we can help them begin to heal. But we need to increase the size of this tag line so it no longer competes with the twin towers quote.
As got review from lynda