"... was among others... " ->
"... was, among others, ..."
"Unique both in both" ->
"Unique in both"
"To find out the details, check out our Speakers page" ->
"For further details, see our Speakers page"
Probably we ought to ask the speakers to provide their own short
biographies but what you had done is good. For instance Sir Walter
would probably want to mention he was Director General of the Imperial
Cancer Research Fund...
Just some small things in the text:
"... was among others... " -> "... was, among others, ..."
"Unique both in both" -> "Unique in both"
"To find out the details, check out our Speakers page" ->
"For further details, see our Speakers page"
Probably we ought to ask the speakers to provide their own short biographies but what you had done is good. For instance Sir Walter would probably want to mention he was Director General of the Imperial Cancer Research Fund...