Change copy for LVV offer page

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Change copy for LVV offer page #5

Open melanie-sun opened 8 years ago

melanie-sun commented 8 years ago

Hi Mike,

Could you update the LVV offer page according to the attached document? I know that Monica briefed you about copy change a while ago, but when I look at the page, it seems unchanged. In addition, LVV also wants to add the Shopping Express promo code to the copy.

CNY Villages offers_LVV update.docx

Thanks, Mel

iamike commented 8 years ago

Hi Melanie, Thanks for support me. I have already send update to 5adian. please let me know, if there is any issues remian. thanks

Mike

melanie-sun commented 8 years ago

Hi Mike,

Sorry, LVV wants to change the copy again! Please find the attached document for the revised copy. I've highlighted the change in yellow.

CNY.Villages.offers_LVV.update2.docx

Just let me know when you can update the copy and I will reply to the client.

Hope you get well soon.

With regards, Mel

iamike commented 8 years ago

I have already send an update to Olex. please review once updated