remove jargon and address reviewer critiques

[jaybee84]

Purpose

closes #175 For review please refer to the comments linked in #199

Directions for reviewers

Which areas should receive a particularly close look?

• Was I able to remove all jargon?
• Are the concepts clear as defined?

Is there anything that you want to discuss further?

• do we need to add anything else?

Is the pull request ready for review?

Yes

Manuscript checklist

Unless otherwise noted above, this PR will be considered ready for review when all four items have been checked.

• [ ] All changes to text follow "one sentence per line" [Manubot instructions]
• [ ] All citations follow the Manubot citation instructions
• [ ] All changes or additions to tables follow the Manubot table instructions
• [ ] All figures follow the Manubot figure instructions
• [ ] All terms that need to be added to glossary have been added to #50
• [ ] There are no new spelling errors identified by the Manubot spellchecker

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[jaybee84]

troubleshooting the build fails here: https://github.com/manubot/manubot/issues/329

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ok... I think this PR is now ready for review

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