Review

[maticstric]

• [x] You need the lines:

<meta property="se:name.person.full-name" refines="#artist">Corinne Anita Loos</meta>

<meta property="se:name.person.full-name" refines="#artist">Léon François Comerre</meta>

... in content.opf. In their appropriate places, of course (https://standardebooks.org/manual/1.6.2/single-page#9.11.4).

• [x] The dedication should have <b> tags around "John Emerson" According to the scans (https://standardebooks.org/manual/1.6.2/single-page#7.3.3).

• [x] Unless I'm missing something this css doesn't do anything and should be removed:

[epub|type~="z3998:diary-entry"] > header + p{
  margin-top: 0;
}

• [ ] There's some instances of "Kunst" which should probably have <span xml:lang"de"> around them but I'll ask on the google groups.

• [x] I might change the "recounts" in the short description to "recounting", because it makes it seem like the diary is doing the recounting, not the young woman. But honestly either is fine.

[jdecock]

You're right that the CSS does nothing. I've removed it. I also agree with the "recounts" to "recounting" change.