Issues

[acabal]

• I see a lot of <br>s in the source. Many of them are at the end of a chapter. You should remove all of those. Some are used for spacing between paragraphs or blockquotes. Instead of <br> you should use the appropriate semantic element for why there is spacing break, and typically that element will include spacing for you already. For example in chapter 17 line 41, that <p> should be wrapped in <blockquote epub:type="z3998:verse">. Remove the <br>s, remove i0, then apply the correct verse style found in our semanatics manual. The result will be correct spacing, but with correct semantics and no style hook classes.
• i0 should be removed completely. It looks like you put it in there because you did not use the correct poetry/verse styles found in the semantics manual. Once you include those styles you'll find that the i0 class is not necessary to remove next-line indents.
• Capitalization instead of italics. There are several cases where words in the PG transcription are ALL CAPS when they are actually italics in the source text. You must fix these by correctly casing them (usually all lowercase) and wrapping in <em>. This case-sensitive regex may be helpful: [A-Z]{2,}
• In the colophon, credit the PG transcribers sequentially. No need to separate them by task. So it should read "Arthur Smith and Al Haines".
• Incorrectly curled quotation mark: Chapter 8, fellers ‘ll
• typogrify makes more changes, run it one more time please
• Metadata:
  • Page scan link is missing from the metadat
  • Typo in long description: Stephen Crane’es

[jgerace]

Fixed the above issues. Thanks!

[acabal]

OK thanks. There were a few more things that I adjusted in the interest of getting this out quickly:

• You did not include the CSS for the poetry semantics you added
• Colophon was not corrected
• Transcribers where listed in one entry in the metadata

Otherwise looks good, it has been released. Thanks!