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[happycharmander]

Purpose/implementation Section

What changes are being implemented in this Pull Request?

• General comments
• Edits and grammar and word choices
• I looked at Rmd sub chapters 1-2
• AVOCADO for comments (I will try to make general comments out of the Rmd file if possible next time!!)

Tell potential reviewers what kind of feedback you are soliciting.

I've marked some terminologies with word to set them apart in the text. Please let me know if I should use it differently (e.g. different font / bold / etc) so I can try fixing it next time too!

New Content Checklist

• [ ] New content/chapter is in an Rmd file with this kind of format and headers.

• [ ] New content/chapter contains Learning Objectives and are in the correct format.

• [ ] Bookdown successfully re-renders and any new content files have been added to the _bookdown.yml.

• [ ] Spell check runs successfully (either using Github actions style-n-check or running manually).

• [ ] Any newly necessary packages that are needed have been added to the Dockerfile and image.

• [ ] Images are in the correct format for rendering.

• [ ] Every new image has alt text and is in a Google Slide.

• [ ] Each slide is described in the notes of the slide so learners relying on a screen reader can access the content. See https://lastcallmedia.com/blog/accessible-comics for more guidance on this.

• [ ] The color palette choices of the slide are contrasted in a way that is friendly to those with color vision deficiencies. You can check this using Color Oracle.

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No spelling errors! :tada: Comment updated at 2022-12-08 with changes from aa7a3e5238a779a79bc4ba84823823a25bd7c717

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Re-rendered previews from the latest commit:

• See preview of Bookdown here
• See preview of Coursera/Leanpub version here
• Download the preview of .docx file

Updated at 2022-12-08 with changes from aa7a3e5238a779a79bc4ba84823823a25bd7c717