Key Differences: fixed leading caps error & added a line saying the LLC will be more strategically oriented
General LLC Responsibilities:
-- Fixed the issue Brian raised, plus some other grammatical clean up
-- Added text to the transparency section from Joe's slides at IETF-101
-- In sections where we said the LLC would be responsive to community feedback, I made it more specific by qualifying this as consensus-based community feedback. This may or may not provoke a reaction. My concern in adding it was over a small minority of loud voices drowning out a silent majority.
-- Added a new section header LLC Working Principles to break up a longer section
-- Renamed the "Staffing" section to "Executive Director and Staff Responsibilities" and moved it up to right after board responsibilities. This should make the contrast between the LLC and ED/staff more apparent. I also added some specific examples in a bullet list you should look at as well.
Board Composition:
-- Added Option 3 as a placeholder
-- Swapped the order of this and Board Design Goals so that we lead with the design goals
Board Term Length & Limit:
-- Broke out into two distinct sections plus a section on vacancies and removal. Basically placeholder text here - need to work on this with the WG next week.
Broke out board positions into a new Board Positions section
Added Initial Tasks of the Board at the end of the doc
Working notes / summary of changes on 5/11/18:
Abstract: fixed spelling error
Scope Limitation: added NomCom per Brian
Key Differences: fixed leading caps error & added a line saying the LLC will be more strategically oriented
General LLC Responsibilities: -- Fixed the issue Brian raised, plus some other grammatical clean up -- Added text to the transparency section from Joe's slides at IETF-101 -- In sections where we said the LLC would be responsive to community feedback, I made it more specific by qualifying this as consensus-based community feedback. This may or may not provoke a reaction. My concern in adding it was over a small minority of loud voices drowning out a silent majority. -- Added a new section header LLC Working Principles to break up a longer section -- Renamed the "Staffing" section to "Executive Director and Staff Responsibilities" and moved it up to right after board responsibilities. This should make the contrast between the LLC and ED/staff more apparent. I also added some specific examples in a bullet list you should look at as well.
Board Composition: -- Added Option 3 as a placeholder -- Swapped the order of this and Board Design Goals so that we lead with the design goals
Board Term Length & Limit: -- Broke out into two distinct sections plus a section on vacancies and removal. Basically placeholder text here - need to work on this with the WG next week.
Broke out board positions into a new Board Positions section
Added Initial Tasks of the Board at the end of the doc