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IETF Internet-Draft for Completely Encrypting RTP Header Extensions and Contributing Sources
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[Lars Eggert] Grammar/style #72

Closed murillo128 closed 2 years ago

murillo128 commented 2 years ago

Section 5, paragraph 0

fication has been negotiated, sending a RTP packet that has any CSRCs or cont
                                      ^

Use "an" instead of "a" if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. "an article", "an hour".

Section 5.1, paragraph 4

ecryption Procedure, and passed to the the next layer to process the packet a
                                   ^^^^^^^

Possible typo: you repeated a word.

Section 6.2, paragraph 9

ence number and SSRC identifier. Accordingly these values are also not encryp
                                 ^^^^^^^^^^^

A comma may be missing after the conjunctive/linking adverb "Accordingly".

murillo128 commented 2 years ago

https://github.com/juberti/cryptex/commit/4ae5dd2c60573f67a72fc35f1c5c291e08b9670f

https://github.com/juberti/cryptex/commit/3c184e51f745acba9c84002054496d7449f086c3

https://github.com/juberti/cryptex/commit/17222f5ccdffa43e9d4d53f701af0f53cc80b5d9