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GearHead: Arena, the first game in this roguelike mecha RPG series.
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On commas #76

Open o11c opened 7 years ago

o11c commented 7 years ago

The Domino's "Stealth system" module is described as

┌────────────────────────────┐                                                      
│      Stealth System        │                                                      
│[-] - DP                    │                                                      
│                            │                                                      
│Stealth +3, 40 Trauma.,     │                                                      
│Integral                    │                                                      
│                            │                                                      
│                            │                                                      
│                            │                                                      
└────────────────────────────┘

I'm not sure exactly what "Trauma" means for mecha equipment, but a period shouldn't be followed by a comma.

That said, it's a bit odd that these are the only two description-components which precede themselves with a comma at all. It's better to use more lines, it's not like there's a shortage. (and likewise, for weapons break the info up onto multiple lines, deliberately leaving visual "holes" for things like BV:1 that are implied)