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Tri 1: Python and Flask Intro
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Review Ticket: 10/18/21 Presentation #51

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ghost commented 2 years ago

Review Ticket for 10/18 Presentation. Leave 3 things we did well and 1 thing we could improve on.

Comments made by Daniel Levy: 8, 1 per scrum team Comments made by Karthik Valluri: 8, 1 per scrum team Comments made by Dylan Luo: 8, 1 per scrum team Comments made by William Du: 8, 1 per scrum team Total comments: 32 total comments

Backlog 1: Photo API by Daniel L. Backlog 2: Pop Up On Websites by Dylan L.

jm1021 commented 2 years ago

Review ticket in zoom

1 minute of Project

2 minute runtime

Technical overview

Nice visuals and design using backgrounds. Cards on Samsung phones looks impressive.

Big focus of time spent on visuals. Could Cards be driven by lists now???

Archkitten commented 2 years ago

The neon theme, design, and unique backgrounds for each page was visually appealing, nice job! The ability to search for specific devices catering to the user's needs was a very thoughtful idea.

sanvi1855544 commented 2 years ago

The idea is good but I wish that you personalized the homepage UI more--it looks very similar to the birds repo Mr. M had us pull on the first day. That being said, the design for the iPhone page is well made. Regarding your code, I wish it was less static, maybe add CSS animations?

isabelle926 commented 2 years ago

The theme of the website was very appealing and the pages that showcased the products was very nice

rkaavya commented 2 years ago

I really like the design of your website. I also really like the different products that you display and how stylistically appealing your display is.

katiehickman commented 2 years ago

I like the design of your homepage because it's unique and I like how it changes for pcs/apple/etc. I also like the video and the pause button because it brings your website to life. One thing to improve on is to make your about us part more visually appealing.

DerekBokelman commented 2 years ago

Positive: The page where you can see all of the computers is super cool I love how you added multiple backgrounds, it gives the website a really cool look. The pause button on the video was really cool and probably my favorite feature.

Things to work on: I think you guys could work on the how its made page. Yu could possibly add a background or something of that matter to make it more visually interesting.

shreya-ahujaa commented 2 years ago

I like the design of you pages and how they are all similar but have different backgrounds, which still makes it unique. I also like the pause and play buttons and how the video relates the website. One improvement could be adding a background to one of your pages that did not have one to make it more similar to the other pages

Tyler929 commented 2 years ago

Backgrounds look visually appealing and make the interface more user-friendly. Minilabs/technicals you showed look very cool + intriguing. Although the backgrounds + UI of the main website pages look very nice, the theme is inconsistent after navigating through some of the minilab pages.

David-Xie123 commented 2 years ago

The overall design for the website is pretty nice, and I like how you included a wide variety of devices. A point of improvement would be to add a background to make it visually appealing

kamyamah commented 2 years ago

I liked the design and layout of the page, but I feel the image quality and size could be smaller like we made in the RGB lab to improve the functionality and smoothness of the website when transitioning page to page. The background was nice but it seemed a bit disorganized overall. The pause and play was and interesting feature. So was the multiple backgrounds.

mahimak19 commented 2 years ago

Graphics on website are really creative and cool. The idea of having a website for devices is really creative. Implementation of mini lab is good, and I like how you converted the X-box images to black and white. Maybe an improvement is to change the formatting of a couple pages so that it looks neater.

TimL1n commented 2 years ago

The formatting of the various pages is very nice to be able to see different options of laptops/phones and their hardware and features. Also the integrated video of Playstation gameplay was very nice. One thing I feel like could be improved upon is that the rest of your website feels bland because not much is changed from the original.

MaBoinjd commented 2 years ago

Your page design is well made and I like the incorporation of different types of gaming/electronics. One suggestion is to use less screenshots as it can be overwhelming.

dtsivkovski commented 2 years ago

I am impressed with the embeds and the backgrounds, it make your page very colorful and nice to look at. I also am impressed with your integration of the greyscale project into your website, as well as the dynamic search bar. A potential improvement is to optimize some of the embeds (such as the google doc ones) to show more of the content without cramming it into a small box.

YashShah138 commented 2 years ago

The home page background is very appealing and interesting, I think you could add some consistency throughout your project

VidhiKulkarni commented 2 years ago

I think the theme of the website was really good. I also liked how you added multiple backgrounds. I think the overall layout is appealing and easy to understand. One thing to improve would be to change the layout of a couple of pages to make it easier to understand.

kiannp44 commented 2 years ago

I really like the background, it seems very appealing. I feel like its very complicated when all the different pages are on the main navbar. It might be better to take a drop down for the different systems. Other than that, the website looks very appealing to the eye.

willcyber commented 2 years ago

Very visually appealing website. Very cool UI. I like how you added a "How it's made" minilab page. Very unique how you implemented a video on your website. One thing you should add to your page is making the device pages more interactive. You could have a button where you can buy and view the product.

Chom642 commented 2 years ago

I really liked the UI and the theme of the website. Most of the different pages of the website looked very professional and well made. I also really liked the addition of a pause button the video. However I feel like that some of the other pages on your website were bland and could be improved upon.

tonyhieu commented 2 years ago

There is a lot of content and pictures on your website which I like. I feel like it might be a little difficult to navigate, though; consider adding more links to the navbar

Isaac-Le commented 2 years ago

I like the idea of the website of giving people a place to get electrical devices, and i like the way you have showed that but if you could add more technicals to some certain pages I think would make the page much better.

AD1616 commented 2 years ago

Layout of different pages are clean, but it would be cool to use an API instead of just pictures; I like the hardware button for the PC's. The playstation video is nice with a pause button. Incorporation of grayscale is there on the xbox page, but it doesn't really make sense.

Gabrielboudreau commented 2 years ago

Like the implementation of the gray scale for the controllers in the Xbox. Also like the use of the spiderman video in the PS5 section and the professional images used in the apple portion. I think adding slightly easier navigation would strengthen the rest of the project.

Pitsco commented 2 years ago

The page seems very well-designed and user-friendly with many aspects that I search for. The technical parts are very well designed and the transition throughout all the parts of the website is pretty smooth. Though, you could elaborate more on what you presented in your code and how it was made.

Reinhardtlotter commented 2 years ago

I like how it easily displays a lot of information that is easy to read by visitors but the only thing I would add is making it more user interactive. Add something the user can do or a way for them to interact more with the website.

NathanManangan commented 2 years ago

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aidanywu commented 2 years ago

The background images were visually appealing and adds a very nice feeling to your website. Something you could improve on would be make the navbar and other sites have the same style as the rest of the website.

tangalice commented 2 years ago

I liked how you added the option to search for it a phone was available or not. I also like your theme and color palette for your website. One thing to improve on would be to make the website easier to navigate because currently it seems a bit confusing.

xXAASXx commented 2 years ago

Things that I like: I love the design of the website where I can always see different types of technology. The home page background was the most appealing factor.

Things that can be Improved: There are many bland parts in the website that can easily be improved by adding more features. I think a Pop-Up of each device would make the website look great. Add better backgrounds, all I have been seeing is just black and white backgrounds instead of cool colors and images to match the overall idea of the website.

LindaLiu1202 commented 2 years ago

I really like how the website looks and how you have a lot of information in your website. The overall design of the website is really good; the backgrounds and the text fonts are all looking really nice! But the website may be a bit hard to navigate.

ellenjxu commented 2 years ago

I really loved the pictures which gave a unified and consistent look to the page! One overall comment is that additional functionalities with buttons and JS could be nice for interactivity

BrianZhang2016 commented 2 years ago

I liked how colorful your background is how it fits your project. Furthermore, the home page of your website was so visual appealing with the cool colors. I also like how you have a pause and play button for the video on the PS5. One thing you could change is to have all your website have colorful backgrounds.

Nayanav commented 2 years ago

I like the idea of the project, where we can look at different forms of technology such as iPhones and Xboxes. The theme of the website matched your idea and stayed consisted. The usage of the grey scale into the Xbox. One improvement would be to know when to use visual elements, as it seemed there were quite a few throughout the page.