Closed pcresswell closed 10 years ago
Need to keep it simple. I like the mailchimp simplicity.
Current Email:
We've almost finished. Now we need to confirm your email address so we've sent you an email. Please check your inbox to complete the signup. Happy mixing! The Becipe Team
This is good. Simple. Lets try and have a bit of fun:
We're almost done! Just one more ingredient is needed.
We just sent you a confirmation email. Please check your inbox and click on the big "Confirm Registration" button to open your account.
Happy mixing! The Becipe Team
to activate your account instead of open an account, maybe? On Aug 12, 2013 11:55 AM, "pcresswell" notifications@github.com wrote:
Current Email:
We've almost finished. Now we need to confirm your email address so we've sent you an email. Please check your inbox to complete the signup. Happy mixing! The Becipe Team
This is good. Simple. Lets try and have a bit of fun:
We're almost done! Just one more ingredient is needed.
We just sent you a confirmation email. Please check your inbox and click on the big "Confirm Registration" button to open your account.
Happy mixing! The Becipe Team
— Reply to this email directly or view it on GitHubhttps://github.com/katrinsharp/becipe/issues/25#issuecomment-22503392 .
"Activate" is much better. Yes.
Also, here is the current "Thank you" text.
Congradulations peter! The account was successfully confirmed. Let's get started. What about creating your first Becipe? Happy mixing! The Becipe Team
Suggest changing to:
Congratulations Peter! Your account is confirmed. Let's get started. How about creating your first Becipe? Happy mixing! The Becipe Team
Just a spelling correction, capitalization on first name and the rest. Really like the prompt to create the first recipe.
Feedback?
I believe we need to call the user by name he has submitted. Something like: Hi Peter, almost done etc
On Thu, Aug 15, 2013 at 6:00 PM, pcresswell notifications@github.comwrote:
[image: screen shot 2013-08-15 at 6 00 04 pm]https://f.cloud.github.com/assets/1090039/972218/2138e558-05f6-11e3-8c96-038a410059a2.png
Feedback?
— Reply to this email directly or view it on GitHubhttps://github.com/katrinsharp/becipe/issues/25#issuecomment-22734034 .
Best Regards, Katrin
Good idea. More personal.
--Peter
On 2013-08-16, at 3:45 AM, Katrin notifications@github.com wrote:
I believe we need to call the user by name he has submitted. Something like: Hi Peter, almost done etc
On Thu, Aug 15, 2013 at 6:00 PM, pcresswell notifications@github.comwrote:
[image: screen shot 2013-08-15 at 6 00 04 pm]< https://f.cloud.github.com/assets/1090039/972218/2138e558-05f6-11e3-8c96-038a410059a2.png>
Feedback?
— Reply to this email directly or view it on GitHub< https://github.com/katrinsharp/becipe/issues/25#issuecomment-22734034> .
Best Regards, Katrin
— Reply to this email directly or view it on GitHubhttps://github.com/katrinsharp/becipe/issues/25#issuecomment-22752222 .
Need to create a confirmation and thank you email for signup process.