[PD] Giving feedback on the e-mails

[kayali436]

From Module-JS1 created by kfklein15: CodeYourFuture/Module-JS1#43

Coursework content

In pairs, within your groups review 1 of the 3 written emails. Provide objective feedback and actionable improvement points for either person’s English or content itself. You can do this in person or via a call. Later send it in writing to your peer.

Estimated time in hours

1

What is the purpose of this assignment?

To learn how to give feedback in person and writing.

How to submit

• Share the link to your written feedback as a comment on this issue
• Share a screenshot of it, too, on this ticket.

Anything else?

[kayali436]

https://docs.google.com/document/d/1sLnVtqWHMwklC5dzmUDUTtwuhvMkYyr_s1Iz8BJFMDY/edit?usp=sharing

link to my document above