[Docs] Update MLflow docs page in #3856

[stichbury]

Description

Fork PR because I'm not a maintainer

Development notes

Few suggested fixes and Vale cleanup

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Checklist

• [ ] Read the contributing guidelines
• [ ] Signed off each commit with a Developer Certificate of Origin (DCO)
• [ ] Opened this PR as a 'Draft Pull Request' if it is work-in-progress
• [ ] Updated the documentation to reflect the code changes
• [ ] Added a description of this change in the RELEASE.md file
• [ ] Added tests to cover my changes
• [ ] Checked if this change will affect Kedro-Viz, and if so, communicated that with the Viz team

[astrojuanlu]

Merging this straight away to continue the discussion in the main PR