The body of Her Story is nearly done, but some of it still needs to be edited. Go through the whole thing, reading it aloud, and see if anything clunks on the ear.
I also need to consider what stylistic thing to add here. This might involve an integrated video that shows what the game looks like (no more than 5 minutes, skippable.) It also involves images, diagrams, and sound. I still need something else clever, though.
The body of Her Story is nearly done, but some of it still needs to be edited. Go through the whole thing, reading it aloud, and see if anything clunks on the ear.
I also need to consider what stylistic thing to add here. This might involve an integrated video that shows what the game looks like (no more than 5 minutes, skippable.) It also involves images, diagrams, and sound. I still need something else clever, though.