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Master Thesis Design #4

Open Christovis opened 2 years ago

Christovis commented 2 years ago

In order to answer to the research questions, the following supporting sub-questions are formulated Maybe rephrase as: To facilitate the investigation, we populate intermediate goals underneath this overarching research question which we formulate as follows:

Therefore, much interest has been shown in energy transition from policy makers, governments and academics, due to its environmental efficiency [9] To me it sounds like 'the broader society is interested in energy transition due to its environmental efficiency', which seems odd (transition != the state of env. efficiency we aim for ?). Could you maybe reword this a bit.

For instance, Keller, organises the models in three different types [1] depending on their functionalities. If those three types can be listed in a concise manner, I would do so. Since it is mentioned that there are three types one would like to know what they are.

I will try to add more things later today.

kntziora commented 2 years ago

Thank you for your comments, I will check the feedback and incorporate it in the design.

Also, another thing I would like to ask: I haven't mentioned the institutions that are involved in the research yet. Should I include this information or it is not necessary at the moment?

Thank you, have a great rest of the day!

Christovis commented 2 years ago

What institutions do you mean? I am not sure about that. Maybe Vitor has an idea how to go about this.

kntziora commented 2 years ago

I was mainly talking about the Institute for Advanced Study and the University of Amsterdam. I will also ask Vitor tomorrow.

Christovis commented 2 years ago

Simply adding UvA should be sufficient.

vvvasconcelos commented 2 years ago

You can add both IvI and IAS.