krishnak30 / Toronto_Islands_Ferry_Ticket_Counts

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Peer Review #1 by Xizi Sun #1

Closed LilianS77 closed 1 week ago

LilianS77 commented 2 weeks ago
  1. Opening Statement / Summary The paper is highly complete and provides a thorough analysis of ferry ticket counts for Toronto Islands. The research is well-organized, and the progression from the data collection to the analysis and results is logical. Overall, the paper does an excellent job of presenting the findings in a clear and understandable way.

  2. Strong Positive Points The completeness of the paper is impressive, with all sections well-developed and clearly articulated. The sketches are exceptionally well-done and provide a great visual aid to understand the structure of the project. They significantly enhance the clarity of the methodology and how the analysis was conducted. The LLM section is comprehensive and well-integrated into the overall paper. It clearly explains the use of AI tools and the methodology followed.

  3. Critical Improvements Needed The paper could benefit from more discussion of the results. While the findings are well-presented, providing further interpretation and implications of the results would strengthen the impact of the research. In the data folder, there are some repetitive folders. A bit of cleanup and reorganization of the directory would improve the clarity and usability of the repository, making it easier to navigate.

  4. Suggestions for Improvement Expand the Discussion Section: Add more depth to the discussion by interpreting the results in relation to the research question. Highlight any surprising findings, trends, or potential applications of the results. Reorganize the Data Folder: Simplifying the folder structure and removing redundant folders in the data section will enhance the overall organization of the repository. This will make it easier for others to access and replicate your work. Future Considerations: You might want to briefly discuss potential future research or improvements to the current model or data collection in your conclusion.

  5. Evaluation The paper demonstrates a high level of completeness and clarity. The sketches and LLM section are particularly well-done. With improvements to the discussion and some reorganization in the data folder, this paper will be even more polished and professional.

  6. Estimated Mark: 60/64

  7. Reasoning for the Mark: The paper is comprehensive and well-structured, with excellent use of sketches and a thorough LLM section. Expanding the discussion and refining the repository structure would further improve the overall quality of the project. R is appropriately cited: 1 LLM usage (stated in README): 1 Title: 2 Author, date, repo: 2 Abstract: 4 Introduction: 4 Data: 8 Measurement: 3 Prose: 6 Cross-references: 1 Graphs: 3 Referencing: 4 Commits: 2 Sketches: 2 Simulation: 4 Tests: 4 Reproducibility: 3 Code Style: 1 General excellence:3