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krm01 / oot-indigo-mod

Patch file release repo for OOT Indigo mod.
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Odd speech pacing when Becki gives you the bottle #11

Closed adiabatic closed 1 year ago

adiabatic commented 1 year ago

Now that I have her note back, I don't need the bottle anymore so, why don't you keep it!

Pausing after "so" seems weird. How about this, instead?

Now that I have her note back, I don't need the bottle anymore. So why don't you keep it?

Or:

Now that I have her note back, I don't need the bottle anymore, so…why don't you keep it?