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krm01 / oot-indigo-mod

Patch file release repo for OOT Indigo mod.
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Consider adding a comma after `ferns` #6

Closed adiabatic closed 1 year ago

adiabatic commented 1 year ago

While watching the Zfg stream, I saw this:

If she were to discover the hole beneath the broken grave that stands between two ferns the Viscount will have my head.

I'd suggest adding a comma after "ferns". Afterwards is a dependent clause, and after a long clause like the one that came before, I'd pause for a quick breath anyway.