A more concise presentation would likely be helpful in getting the message across. As of now, the site feels a bit long, it should be no longer than 2 "folds" (i.e. less than 2x the typical laptop screen height)
There's also some duplicate information I noticed (e.g. homemade masks).
Tone is a bit aggressive (see #6)
The merch at the bottom of the page makes this seem like a profit-driven endeavour and could put people off from sharing the page.
@larrysalibra nice work, but a few comments:
A more concise presentation would likely be helpful in getting the message across. As of now, the site feels a bit long, it should be no longer than 2 "folds" (i.e. less than 2x the typical laptop screen height)
There's also some duplicate information I noticed (e.g. homemade masks).
Tone is a bit aggressive (see #6)
The merch at the bottom of the page makes this seem like a profit-driven endeavour and could put people off from sharing the page.