Closed markedwardmurray closed 9 years ago
Introduce the problem more clearly.
Fix bad practice in example "CharacterArray".
Don't use string interpolation in the first example. Later, show how it can be used programmatically.
Move accessing keys and properties (self.name) to the actual explanation of the syntax, not the introductory example.
The examples are very convoluted. (Flargaret?)
introduce diacritical marks, why [d] is important.
Maybe explain some more about NSPredicate syntax and its valid comparators? The apple documentation on it kinda sucks.
Don't mention Core Data in the conclusion.
Introduce the problem more clearly.
Fix bad practice in example "CharacterArray".
Don't use string interpolation in the first example. Later, show how it can be used programmatically.
Move accessing keys and properties (self.name) to the actual explanation of the syntax, not the introductory example.
The examples are very convoluted. (Flargaret?)
introduce diacritical marks, why [d] is important.
Maybe explain some more about NSPredicate syntax and its valid comparators? The apple documentation on it kinda sucks.
Don't mention Core Data in the conclusion.