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Update a6.variable_bindings,constants_and_statics.md #60

Closed Dgarc359 closed 2 years ago

Dgarc359 commented 2 years ago

Documentation changes to improve readability

Dgarc359 commented 2 years ago

I made a change near the bottom, changing from before going to the next to before going to the next topic

I believe this improves the intent of the header, but I've also realized that the same string is being used across other pages, it's not going to look uniform unless the change is made across the board. If you'd like I can add a commit to do that, otherwise I can remove the change to the bottom and keep the improvement to the sentence in the info bubble

dumindu commented 2 years ago

@Dgarc359 Thanks for the suggestions but, I would like go with current context

due to we discuss them later -> we'll discuss them later

  • I really really really wanted the readers not to go away and search about that and I wanted to give the feeling it's already planned. So, this is why I used this tense.

Before going to the next... -> Before going to the next topic...

  • I am quite a fan of short and sweet forms. Don't see much difference here.