Closed realtmxi closed 3 months ago
Very interesting topic Murphy! I really like how you structured your work in a very concise and clear format. There are some comments I would suggest in enhancing your work:
- Perhaps elaborate just a little bit more on the introduction, so reader would be to able to get a more thorough understanding in what your are trying to deliver
- Add a table of content for clarity purposes
- Perhaps add a conclusion sections or even a sentence just to summarize your work
Thanks for your review! I add a table of content in the file
Very interesting topic Murphy! I really like how you structured your work in a very concise and clear format. There are some comments I would suggest in enhancing your work: