"Yes, this was the location of some famously poor medical experiments that formed part of the motivation for the Belmont Report. It's an important stop for us to look back and use as an example for reflection."
Suggestion: use something like “irresponsible/ medically immoral” etc. or stronger wording; poor to some people will sound like “a bit shit” rather than “omgwtfbbq this is fucking horrible, Jesus, I can’t!” which is what it was (and you go on to say so later, it’s just a tone thing).
"Yes, this was the location of some famously poor medical experiments that formed part of the motivation for the Belmont Report. It's an important stop for us to look back and use as an example for reflection." Suggestion: use something like “irresponsible/ medically immoral” etc. or stronger wording; poor to some people will sound like “a bit shit” rather than “omgwtfbbq this is fucking horrible, Jesus, I can’t!” which is what it was (and you go on to say so later, it’s just a tone thing).
Tyr
Agreed.