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应该是"一边享受这商业程序员的物质舒适(有钱呗),一边写着没人会看的到的代码 #10

Closed royaso closed 9 years ago

royaso commented 9 years ago

397 Hence the importance of the laser printer and the encounter that resulted from it. Without it, Stallman says, his life might have followed a more ordinary path, one balancing the material comforts of a commercial programmer with the ultimate frustration of a life spent writing invi sible software code. There would have been no sense of clarity, no urgency to address a proble m others weren't addressing. Most importantly, there would have been no righteous anger, an em otion that, as we soon shall see, has propelled Stallman's career as surely as any political i deology or ethical belief. 398 \fi 399 400 \ifdefined\chs 401 打印机事件的重要意义恰在于此。正如斯托曼所言,倘若没有这次事件,他的人生也许就会落入平常,纠结 着,一边开发专有软件,一边痛苦地编写没人会看到的代码。当然也不会有着如今清晰的思路,更不会去解 决别人沿未想过的各种问题。最重要的,他心中也不会再有那份不平,推动着他去追求他的政治理想和道德

信仰。

其他都很好,就一点有错

一边开发专有软件,一边痛苦地编写没人会看到的代码

这个"一边...一边..."的用法明显不对啊,两个一边都是同一个意思啊

应该是"一边享受这商业程序员的物质舒适(有钱呗),一边写着没人会看的到的代码

lifanxi commented 9 years ago

这里的错辞可以进行一些调整,等处理第二版时再修改。

谢谢指正。