Closed nathenf closed 1 week ago
@laurenwigmore I've written the landing page copy for the course here, including a video script. Want to check it and make any corrections/improvements. I think we should aim to get both landing pages out by next week.
@laurenwigmore I've written the landing page copy for the course here, including a video script. Want to check it and make any corrections/improvements. I think we should aim to get both landing pages out by next week.
@laurenwigmore I've got to day 5 of writing the draft. I don't think I have extra time to complete the rest, but I'll set aside some time next week so we can have a handover call.
@laurenwigmore I've got to day 5 of writing the draft. I don't think I have extra time to complete the rest, but I'll set aside some time next week so we can have a handover call.
That's great, thanks Nathen! I'll assign this to myself now. and we're in touch re the call.
FIXED. Course live. More promotion needed in future.
Following on from #879
Acceptance
Tasks
Draft
Publish
Marketing
Landing page text
Text for the landing page is drafted here
Feedback from the CC community volunteers review
I’ve just read it and thoroughly enjoyed it. It’s well written and comprehensive. I cannot fault it at all :-)
You put a great emphasis on ensuring that the article is well balanced - the importance of not considering co-living for the wrong reasons and in the wrong state of mind.
One thing that I noticed is that you didn’t use word “adventure” to describe the initial impetus to consider co-living. I’d personally be very excited about the unpredictability of what will happen in the community and all the potential of beautiful things arising from the interaction and the connectedness. Emergence of creativity and new perceptions feeding into personal growth. Maybe that’s the “rose tinted view”…
Later in the article you wrote this: “If it is too easy to leave, it can create a real or implied disruption to its members which results in a fragile foundation. " - I read it just as I was thinking - what’s there to lose; you try and if it doesn’t work - you can always change your mind. That made me realise what you were saying is correct.