First draft for the intro scene with Shing's grandfather

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Open fortiersteven opened 10 months ago

fortiersteven commented 10 months ago

File: FSHT00P

fortiersteven commented 6 months ago

Translate Zex

fortiersteven commented 6 months ago

Text going offscreen

fortiersteven commented 6 months ago

Text

fortiersteven commented 6 months ago

Maybe we can reprhrase this one? Dont know if "You fools, I'll be the longest living person in the world" ? would still be good

fortiersteven commented 6 months ago

typo

fortiersteven commented 6 months ago

Missing dot

xsonicdragon commented 5 months ago

Missing dot

Fixed this.

xsonicdragon commented 5 months ago

Moved "here" down to the third line.

xsonicdragon commented 5 months ago

Missing dot

Added the period - Maxle

xsonicdragon commented 5 months ago

Fixed all the issues you pointed out.