The mention of what TOTP/HOTP is at the end in the Current Maximized boards section. I think this could be mentioned earlier, in a separate subsection at the very beginning of the document.
There is no mention that HEADS allows you to check the integrity of your computer, and does not block it. The word "key" connotes the ability to unlock something. People associate TOTP with 2FA, which blocks access and only verifies whether both numbers are the same.
Maybe, in the future, as less technical stuff comes together, separate Introduction from Prerequisites for Heads.
It seems to me that the Purism instruction should be under the Table of Contents, and have the heading Purism Librem platform. The current website design is different from the others.
There is a moment where Answer the prompts properly: not everything has to be clear to someone less familiar. Explaining the process as here is helpful.
I leave my comments, from my first exposure to the manual:
Prerequisites for Heads:
Introductionfrom Prerequisites for Heads.Step 2 - Flashing Guides
Purisminstruction should be under the Table of Contents, and have the headingPurism Librem platform. The current website design is different from the others.Step 3 - Configuring-Keys
Answer the prompts properly:not everything has to be clear to someone less familiar. Explaining the process as here is helpful.