Open lizzieinvancouver opened 1 year ago
I think the paragraph (and the whole manuscript) is looking great! One thing I wasn't sure of in reading the above paragraph is- Are we talking about ecological responses generally in this paragraph or focused on phenology responses specifically? If we want phenology specific studies showing that functional traits capture only a fraction of variability in species' responses to the environment, I think this is a good one:
Fuccillo Battle K, Duhon A, Vispo CR, Crimmins TM, Rosenstiel TN, Armstrong‐Davies LL, de Rivera CE. Citizen science across two centuries reveals phenological change among plant species and functional groups in the Northeastern US. Journal of Ecology. 2022 Aug;110(8):1757-74. https://doi.org/10.1111/1365-2745.13926
@AileneKane Thanks! We're trying to make the opening of the paper as general as possible, so other examples would be great -- but not critical. For now I added what you sent.
Just keeping track of some things ...
ED refs from Cat:
I also found this cool paper.
Ailene mentioned we need refs in this paragraph and she is right! @AileneKane We've added what we can, could you help with the last REFS spot and anywhere else you think we need refs?