Open dbuona opened 4 weeks ago
@dbuona Just acknowledging that I am a bit slow on this ... I hope to tackle it in the next few days, but depends how long my grant work stretches for. Apologies! If you need/want to jump in on editing, just tell me and I can hold off. Otherwise, I will just get to ASAP.
@dbuona Update: I did the intro today will take R&D in next few days.
@dbuona I finished a first overhaul and just pushed it. Look for:
%emwNov8:
%emwNov4:
I left as comments a mix of old text that might be better than what I wrote and various stuff I was just not quite ready to let go of. You should use it/cut it as you like.
I did not yet add refs as:
@lizzieinvancouver will work on intro and and quick other changes and then bounce over to @dbuona