Closed diablograves closed 5 years ago
Great skit! My only feedback is that it's kind of hard to tell that the player is unticking the "skip unseen text" option at the end, because their eye isn't really drawn there before you uncheck it.
Perhaps you could use the RigMouse() function in screens.rpy, and use that to move the player's mouse there? You'd just need to change the coordinates that are hardcoded into it (or add the target x and y positions as parameters to the function, allowing you to use it more than once pointing at different places).
And perhaps some button prompts that say "Crap, I went too far..." or something along those lines before they open up the menu, to make it clear that they want to restart.
Hmm. Yeah, it could probably use something. I don't want to explain the joke TOO much, but the mouse idea sounds fun and shouldn't be too hard to implement. I'll play around with it this week and see what I come up with.
Okay, I tweaked things a bit and I think I found something that works. Let me know what you think about the timing for it (it's the hardest part of comedy, after all).
Script file plus mod asset folder