Some parts of the scenario descriptions do not sound like proper scientific-language. You may either rephrase them or add an additional paragraph in the beginning of the section where you mention that the interaction-language used in the following parts is by design to increase the intelligibility.
lucendio
commented
7 years ago
review phase: 3 level: opinion type: phrasing ref: 140
Some parts of the scenario descriptions do not sound like proper scientific-language. You may either rephrase them or add an additional paragraph in the beginning of the section where you mention that the interaction-language used in the following parts is by design to increase the intelligibility.