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https://luceroweb.github.io/haunted-house-game/
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Ghost Bride Grammar suggestion #102

Open jdaniels22 opened 2 years ago

jdaniels22 commented 2 years ago

Devices

iMac macOS Big Sur Version ​​11.6

Safari 15.0

Description

Ghost Bride page displays grammar issue, including a sentence that should include one more word added. Would be better understood if worded "Her face contorts in rage that you've disturbed her mourning of her lost love."

Steps to Reproduce Issue

  1. Open up the game https://luceroweb.github.io/haunted-house-game/#/
  2. Play game until you reach the Ghost bride path
  3. Read the paragraph

Screenshots

Screen Shot 2021-10-27 at 12 20 43 PM
luceroweb commented 2 years ago

@jdaniels22 I believe the ghost bride grammar issue has been resolved. @ProjectErostribe could you please provide a description of what was done so @jdaniels22 can confirm and we can close this issue? cc @lreyes-qae